2010年10月24日日曜日

My Thoughts through the Essay

      I finished the first draft at 6:00 in the morning ,today! It took so long time because I've never written over 1200 words before.
      In the process of writing the essay, I thought a lot about human rights for the intellectual disabled. Although lots of the intellectual disabled live in a institution for all of their lives, is it good for them? To be sure, in the institution, it is safety and they can live with colleague and the helper. However, do the intellectual disabled determine to stay in the institution by themselves? I think it can be helped for them to do that. Thus, their decisions in various things are limited. If society accept the rights for the intellectual disabled same as others and sopport them, they could live by themselves just like everyone else.

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  1. Hi Shino,

    I just wanted to thank you for trying blogging this term. The main idea was to set up a blog and make a couple of entries to experiment with this kind of communicating with one another. I appreciate your doing that, and the thoughts you shared.

    Thanks for being such a good student. You are in a wonderful section, and I wish you all the very best.

    Ken

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